This week Room 4 literacy have been focusing and learning about poems and how to write them. We are learning to use effective vocabulary. Here is Hilary's colour poem. She had to think of some items of different colours and use interesting vocabulary to make it more effective. She then cut out each line and arranged them to ensure they sounded great and had good rhythm.
Colours , A beautiful glowing cheerful rainbow.
Blue, a glistering gleaming sapphire as bright as heaven.
blue , the bright luminous sky.
Pink , a girls gleaming shiny glossy lip gloss.
Red , Ruby's as red and roses and roses as scarlet as blood.
Orange , a fiery blazing glow to fire.
Hi Im zaheer Im a year 8 from Grey main school.This reminds me of something my class did last week.I like your poem.My colour was yellow. Maybe you could visit my blog and check It out!!
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