Wednesday, 5 September 2018

Paikea's Exercise Song!

Paikea had to edit an existing song (Don't give up by six60) so that it had a message about exercise and used technical vocabulary. Check out the lyrics here:

Stop Giving Up. yeah
I'm telling you
Telling you
Telling you, Why
Don’t give it up
No, no, no
It’s good for you 
to ex-er-ciiiiiiise


Losing Weight
Keeps you fit and en-errr-giiiised
Aerobic
Healthy Brains
Pushing through all the time


Don’t you complain.
Just run, bike, swim and train…
train
Keep pushing hard, yeah

I'm telling you
Telling you
Telling you, Why
Don’t give it up
No, no, no
It’s good for you 
to ex-er-ciiiiiiise, yeah

6 comments:

  1. Hello There PES Room 4! My name is Caitlyn, and I came from Grey Main School. I really like how you have used words such as... run,swim... running is my favorite thing to do when I'm bored. I do some running. Losing weight is always a good thing to do. Sounds like you did have fun while writing the song. Six60, they are really good singers. Thanks for sharing your song! Look forward to seeing more great work that you do!

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  2. Talofa Lava Paikea,
    What a FANTASTIC exercise song! I like that you've used Six60, one of my favourite NZ bands, I was singing your song in your song in my head as I read it and the words fit perfectly. Exercise is definitely good for you. I go to bootcamp 3 times a week and I also enjoy lots of walking and running. What kind of exercise do you enjoy doing to keep you fit and energised?
    Ngā mihi
    Tania

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  3. Hey Room 4,
    I really like what you guys have come up with. I hope one day you guys become a singer.
    Keep up the great work.

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  4. Hi Room 4,
    I really like what your class is doing and that it is good that you are trying to write your own songs. I think next time you should post someone singing the song.

    Great Job
    Mei

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  5. Hey Room 4,
    I really like what you guys have been done about tying to write your own song.
    Keep it up.!!!

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  6. Hello Room 4,
    I like how you made a song about getting fit and exercising, This helps people exercise more and get fit.

    Great work
    Jerome

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