Thursday, 24 May 2018


This week we have been writing about issues that are
important to us. This is Lucy's issue.
Did you Know? 40% of homeless
people are Employed. Shouldn’t work be
an escape from poverty?

How did you become homeless ? You can get
homeless By you havingno money and you can be
homeless from you parents Because if your parents
were homeless then you might be homeless too.

Why is Homelessness a problem? I think it is a big
problem because if you have kids how can you
buy food for your kids. And if you are homeless
you don’t have a house and you don’t have any

How can we help? we can help by giving them
some money like when you walk past a homeless
person the you can give them some money in there
hat or there money bag and you can help by giving
some food to eat.

Why is homelessness a bad thing? It is bad because if
you have kids then how can you look after you kids
they are going to be starving how can you buy food
for them.


  1. Hi There. My name is Caitlyn, I think you have done a excellent job on this. Because you know exactly why people are homeless. It's always good to give a homeless person a hand. Well Done!

  2. Kia Ora. My name is Kaede and I am a year 8 student at Grey Main School.I really like the way you guys have explained your thoughts so descriptively. Over all I think you guys have done a great job.

  3. Kia Ora my name is Cleo and I am a year 8 Student from Totara hub Grey Main School. I think you have done a great job doing this because you have learnt something you probably didn't know before about the homeless. Why did you decide to do this about homeless people. Good Job!

  4. Kai Ora Room 4 Rangers,My name is Aimee and I am from Grey Main Scholl in Greymouth. You have done a Amazing job on writing.You have Wring the right stuff about homeless people. Well done for helping those people who struggle i there life.
    Well done,
    From Aimee Hogue

  5. Hi my name is Jerome from St Pius X School, I like how you care to think about the homeless people. I agree with you and I think we should just donate a little bit of food for homeless people.

    Great work

  6. Hi Room 4,
    My Name is Opi I go to St Pius X School,I like how you are caring about the Homeless People.
    Keep Up The Good Work!!!

  7. Malo lelei Room 4 Rangers,My name is Michael from St Pius X School,I like the way how you explained about the homeless people.

    Great Work

  8. Hi Room 4,
    My name is Mei. I go to St Pius X School. I like to help a lot of people like you like to help people.I wish we could do something that could help them.
    Keep up the good work!!!

  9. Hi Room 4,
    My name is Helena. I go to St Pius X School.
    I like it how you tell us if Homeless is an bad thing or good thing. I like the information you have put what Homeless is about.

    Hi! I like how you told us how we can help with the poor! next time re-read your writing because some words are connected!
    But GREAT learning!! Joseph

  11. Hi Room 4,
    I like the way you tell us if homeless is an bad thing or a good thing. I find the information interesting.

  12. Hey Room 4,
    I like how you guys are trying to help the poor,next time you guys should go help the poor and give food.Keep it up.