Tuesday, 9 March 2021

The Robbery - Rae Jae

He had just woken up. It was a disaster when he stepped out of the door. There was nothing left. He had been robbed. No TV, no wallet and they took his whole life, the painting he had created that cost $8B, It was worth his life to him. The painting took him 32 years to finish.

What he created in 32 years was destroyed in about 5 minutes. Now that the painting was gone he quit his job as an artist. He was upset. The police checked the cameras but nothing was spotted, It was like the robbers never came.  

That's what he would have said if he really got robbed. You see the one the robbers stole was a fake. His real painting was locked in a highly secure base located in an unknown base. He was the only one who knew where it was.

He laughed at the robbers...


  1. Hi Room 4,
    This was a great story! It had a great plot twist and great detail! Keep up the splendid work!
    From Kiarah

  2. Hi Room 4,

    This was a very good story! I love how it's short but the plot twist makes it interesting!

    Keep it up,

    Aye :)

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  4. Hello, Ngairon here from Ahipara school. I really like your post telling a story about a robbery it sounded very amusing. Ka pai

  5. Hello room 4,
    that is a really good story with a funny twist. Really good discription too. Keep up the good work!
    sincerely Teal from Ahipara school.

  6. Hello its Tane MacDonald from Ahipara school and I really enjoyed this, it´s pretty good and you also did a good job of that Google drawing man, it was good because since you made the shape black it really added shadowing to the person. Hoping to talk with you soon bye!